Thanks for bring your Earth Day poster on Wednesday. Unfortunately it was due on Monday and you were absent. If I had been able to talk to you about some design issues in this poster I think it might have made it stronger visually. The poster is just an exaggerated Advertisement of sorts right now. There are too many lines of copy throughout the format.The white spotlight in the middle is not doing much except highlight the words ...green tea that is. Should have been an illustration there inside of text in my opinion. Please post your specialty pieces today.
Thanks for bring your Earth Day poster on Wednesday.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately it was due on Monday and you were absent. If I had been able to talk to you about some design issues in this poster I think it might have made it stronger visually. The poster is just an exaggerated Advertisement of sorts right now. There are too many lines of copy throughout the format.The white spotlight in the middle is not doing much except highlight the words ...green tea that is. Should have been an illustration there inside of text in my opinion.
Please post your specialty pieces today.